I wasn’t sure what was in the box, but it looked really intriguing.The box looked ancient from some old generation pirates. The box was made out of wood and leather with some shiny gold around the lock. I felt it over. Do I need a key to get into it?
I can feel the adrenaline pumping through my brain. I forced the lock. It started to rattle. My fingers were trembling. I lifted the lid slowly. It was empty except for a large mysterious key. I looked around the dark steep cave to find the mysterious door. I searched for hours until I found a gigantic ledge which dropped down, leading into a door for a dwarf.
i like the story and all the words you have put in the sentence like intriguing and adrenaline
ReplyDeleteGreat work Andrew. I think this is your best writing this year. Congratulations on your good mix of sentence types!
ReplyDeleteNice work Andrew I like the word gigantic and The Ronaldo and Pele thing Good Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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